Years spent wondering
Times of wandering
Dreams crashing
On the waves
Times I’ve wanted
So much, too much
From those who couldn't
Or wouldn’t give
Days gone by the way
Sadness and anger
Tears and self doubt
Not knowing then
What life was about
A touch in the dark
Whispered words
And hands held
Laughter, sharing
Breathless, mindless
Ageless and timeless
A dream destined to be
The moment you found me.
Author notes
Maybe it takes a little bit longer for some of us to find that special one.
A contest entry
- Pre-writes & Fresh Writes by LadyUnique.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 56 entries
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Comments
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'breathless, mindless
ageless and timeless'
loved those lines
tight poem, no wasted words
thanks for entering and best of luck
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Yep!
Great poem you've penned. I agree for some of us it takes a little longer...


