his cold soft hand are on my chest
his string thin hair hanging at its best
his whole body is open free
his gorgious abs so tormenting
i want him and he wants me too
so we embrase with a kiss or two
so make love with so much urge
that in the end it surge
so as i lay in his great embrace
i wispers a song of beauty and grace
so as he lay there just him and me
we sleep and dream of iternity
Author notes
i am gay and this is what happened the day i lost my verginity to my boyfriend.
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Comments
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i love this poem so much.
