If the darkness chokes,
desolation awaited me,
spiraled to oblivion.
The rose seems withering
only glows on bloody earth.
Ghost-images torment my mind.
Fragments of my soul, float out of control
on a burning river of mourning,
waiting until a real mind shows up.
Death seduces me with sweet whispering.
Forgotten intentions, messages of the spirit.
Confused property, in nobody's land.
A contest entry
- 50-55 words by creationsfromheart.
475 points, ended March 20, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hey nevel this is great thank you and good luck in the contest
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Hi
I you want that I edit the poem, make it shorter, just say it
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Very emotional. I understand where you are coming from.
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Thank you for your understanding
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Forgotten intentions, messages of the spirit.
Confused property, in nobody's land.
Awesome loved this stanza -
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Thank you
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wow the imagery in this is phenonmenal - nice write
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some very deep emotions
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Thank you, my dear
.Just some emotions
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Nicely done. Great vivid write here.
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Thank you!
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