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I am . . .

I am deep because I want to enjoy
every part of life that I can get
so that way I don't miss a smile
laugh , or happy tear that I can get

I am deep because I get all my insperation
from my life , and yours
so I can write poems others
can relate to and enjoy

I am deep because I want to appreciate
everything nature can give us
from insperation , to everyday living
that is whay I am deep . . .

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    December 7, 2008
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    beautiful, just like u! ily, this is brillianttt; :]]


  • ChemicallyEmilie
    February 20, 2008
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    omg! i love it page!! you are such a good writer! love emilie!


  • Darkened Seraph
    February 19, 2008

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    aww niece, this is a really wonderful poem, it has a really nice flow through it and lots of nice imagery, i love the repitition of I am deep because, it really helps add to the effect of the poem and allows the reader to understand why you are writing this poem, i hope this does well in the contest

    much love

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    February 18, 2008
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    Nicely done. Thanks for reentering. Good luck to you. Brian