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Palatable Pleasure

Tongue tingles...

enamored with enticement
salivating and seeking
the epitome of palatable pleasure
licking along length
of your delectable desire.

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20 word quickie: Delicious

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  • azure85 gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    Holey Moley, an aliteration of paradise and sensations you have created with the prompt! Congrats on the silver!


  • Dark Otter
    February 18, 2008
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    Done right!

    Should've placed in top two. Well done, poet


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    This was deserving of the SILVER

    Congrats! dearest poet!
    you captured it really well!
    applause-applause-applause!
    ears/Seattle

  • PerfectImperfection
    February 18, 2008

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    And again! WOW! This is so hot, and delicious!!! An amazingly penned take on the prompt! Damn.... I need to go and find some length, j/k lmao!!! Fantastic piece!!!


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    February 18, 2008
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    oooh this is yummy!
    best of luck

    Tasha


  • natchstucco
    February 18, 2008

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    Yup...very tasty indeed...This is great with the edible undies or the sharp sugas one can get at the ole industrial luv place...not that i go there.


  • Cerulean Sunrise
    February 18, 2008
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    Oh this was beautiful.
    Nice indeed.

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