You make me feel good,
able to relax and love.
but when your not here,
I feel cold and alone.
When your here,
I sleep with you on a bed of roses,
when your gone,
It feels like a bed of nails.
When your here,
I feel so alive,
when your gone,
Im lifeless.
Thats why I love you,
everytime your around,
I get butterflies
Author notes
"I want to lay you down on a bed of roses, for tonight I sleep on a bed of nails."
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice .. I so wanted to sing Bon Jovi's Bed of roses though.
This was a really good piece poetry though, I liked very much indeed. Keep penning. The last line was my favorite!
-Mandi
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nice. good luck in the contest, jo. great write (just not in a commenting mood)
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Aww, this is very sweet :-] You really captured the emotion. A touching piece of poetry here.
Thanks for entering, and good luck.
xxx
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