I haven't anyone to blame but myself
I left my heart lying on a shelf,
left for anyone to pick up
I just wasn't expecting it to be you.
My suicide solution fading
I have nothing to grasp
Death is silently waiting,
Waiting on me to leave you.
And i know nothing but agony
pain and shame beyond my years
something that i will always fear,
all because of you.
Now i am broken, bleeding
on the inside I'm just screaming
how did you have me believing
that i could really love you?
Why did you do this to me?
How could i let this happen?
Why would you want to hurt me?
Leave me here....
to die...
Author notes
"My misery has been formulated into an equation of nein... My sanity wrote a suicide note, but One of us is illiterate... And the other is blind"-Otep
this was a bit hard the song kept popping into my head....
A contest entry
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1006 points, ended March 15, 2008, 27 entries
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i think that this picked up i disagree with the comment below it is all good
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hmm... You started out good, but then it kinda went downhill from there... it got a bit cliche at the end. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Wow this is so sad, but I love it! Brilliant write!
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Emotionally perfect!
You have captured the emotions in the poem absolutely suberbly! Amazing structure!
Fab write!
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A dramatic poem that jumps right into the reader's space and speaks out strongly.
Fine write here! 
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