A deep wave of stillness
over a calm lake.
The early quiet of a
morning sky.
Swirling thoughts
in a confused mind.
A beautiful sunset;
perfect to sail into.
The colour of beautiful,
serenity and peace.
Pure wonder and awe.
My love of this colour
is beyond obsession.
Surrounding, majestic.
Everything.
Purple....
Author notes
Option 3 - favourite colour
I don't really have one favourite colour so i picked one. Purple truly does mystify me. Its such a hard colour to describe. This picture is my desktop pic and i found it very inspirational:
http://p.webshots.com/ProThumbs/81/36781_wallpaper280.jpg
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A contest entry
- Help me wish my sister a happy birthday and cheer her up ^^ by Noir mariposa...x.
1100 points, ended August 10, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Purple: by baconlicious112.
500 points, ended April 24, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please judge as critically as you want
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Purple really is magestic..This poem really captures it, that's for sure. Thanks for entering!
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Thanks for the comment!
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Everything....
purple
^^
I'm gonna go around today and just repeat that line
I might get a few odd stares but hey, what the heck, I like that line 
Great write; I love how its done, and I'm sure Nat'll like it too ^^
Thank you for entering it!
Claire x
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An interesting write for the colour purple. It is so interesting how people can percieve things different ways. Great write.
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this poem is just as good as your red poem, though a bit shorter. Why don't you finish it up with the rest of the colors? it would be a great past time.
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it was for a contest then the ocntest was deleted. i wrote this before the others so its not like a muse. oh well
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I love how you wrote about a color! purple is my fovorite color! you captured the image well! great job!!!
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you do have a point purple is hard to describe but you did an excellent job at doing so i liked the imagery and imagination you put inot this poem keep it up and best wishes in the contest.
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This is brilliant! You really captured your emotion on this pretty colour, and you wrote about it very well. Hard to believe you're just 13! You're a great writter...keep it up.
Thanks for entering, and good luck.
xxx
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