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Amber Angel

A glowing star,
a distant light.
The first thing I see tonight.
When the night is still,
and the moon births a new bloom.
The Amber Angel will rock you goodnight.
For am I mistaken the beauty of the Amber Angel?
Her wings the color of a dying fire,
yet has the aggressive light with a touch of heaven.

The Amber Angel, the Holy Grail of the innocent. 

The Pretector of the sick and frail.

The glowing star,

the distant light.

The Amber Angel comes yet tonight.

A contest entry

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  • leander Moderators member
    March 27, 2008

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    I really like the line "and the moon births a new boom". That really jumped out to me in fact
    You have captured great imagery within these lines - well done!

    Thank you for the entry - I wish you the very best!
    Leander


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 26, 2008
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    I like the angel bit here, but I have to be honest, when i read this aloud all my mind heard was "star light star bright" it just would not stop.


  • Celticmoon
    March 24, 2008

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    A cute little piece expressing the compassion and beauty of an angel.
    Thank you for entering.
    Best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Angie8792
    March 7, 2008
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    i like this one a lot


  • Hope Angel silver member
    February 29, 2008
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    OHHHHHWWWWOOOWWWWW!! This is beautiful beyond words! I love it! Such beautfiul imagary!


  • ccamo3
    February 18, 2008

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    i lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve this! it rox! and when I post this you'll see amy lee as my pix! yah!

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