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Drown

Drown

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

Its me ,

Walking down the bridge of life

Just nature meditating .

Trying to break jail house

Thoughts free from

Writers block sanity.

Cantaloupe trees

Robbed poverty

And smiles of

Different color

Faces find away

To spray inner

Hatred mace

Upon me.

But I am

The dim lights

Of fog

And the sensitive

Emotions

Of no more.

Because I am

Walking the bridge

Of drowning

Sorrow.

If I gave you

A tablet of my pain,

In return

Could you

Pour me a fresh glass

Of just go away.

Because

The torture,

The restless

Peace ,

Its written

In I want to die

Tattoo.

Just traveling

The loud sounds

Of my creepiness.

Trying to sew together

The mended

Forgiveness ,

That is just so

Hard to do.

I am close to the

Edge like so

Many times before

And at this moment,

Just let my

Feet agree with me

And just give me

Wings

No medicine

In any dose

Seem unable to cure.

I want to drown

In peace,

No help,

Just let me go

As the pain will

Be no more

Hunting at me.

I have closed my eyes

And ask Jehovah

Please to forgive me.

But I have to jump

To kill strife

Right alone

With my

Gifted

L

I

F

E

.

.

.

 

 

Its my rage

Poking out my personality

Like a trapped

S

L

A

V

E

 

.

.

.

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

 

 

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    February 26, 2008

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    wow, this is pretty good. I like how you wrote it, girl! keep up your amazing work!!! Thanks for sending this to meh.

    CrimsonViper


  • moluv10
    February 20, 2008

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    This is so deep. it's good to release these feelings every now and then so that they don't build up and cause other problems. this makes me think about my own personal demons and how i am dealing with them. I am continually amazed by your writes.


    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      February 21, 2008
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      thanks honey i
      have to get it out
      are your girl want
      be responsible for
      her action being serious
      i look at my sons and try my damnist
      to give me a reason to live


  • kennethlaney
    February 19, 2008

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    Very Good

    Good Ideals on the thought of, for something to begin sometimes something has to die or be given up. Almost like a baptism.


  • Lil Atl 30319
    February 19, 2008

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    shedding tears i feel
    if i was at least there
    i can heal some parts of
    this trapped demons
    from a reader stand point
    DAMN YOU KNOW HOW TO BRING
    ON THE FREAKIN TEARS


  • ennovy silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    You speak of many emotions then it boils down to one..Love! I hope this is only a symbolic jump to kill strife, for Jehovah love all that is his. Plus in our inperfections we are all slaves of sin and temptation. He knows what we can stand, and He loves you....I love this write because it's the path so many women trod everyday. You have written an eye opener...You're very beautiful talented poet...Rock on...I love the message you speak here...novy

  • almostgone
    February 18, 2008

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    Simple amazing hun! You work your magic like no one else with spoken word. It flows so well and so sensually, no matter what it is you write. Pure emotion in this piece!

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