Squinting through eclectic windows,
best elements is All I see.
Wile plays games with what is proposed;
need time to seek changes in Me.
Vision sees people turned around,
squinting through eclectic windows.
Within Us is where change is found.
Wile plays games with what is proposed!
No reason for this world to change,
best elements is All I see.
It's humans that must rearrange,
need time to seek changes in Me.
Author notes
Option # 1
Visual Art Credit
"Light & Transformation"
by Ansel Adams
http://anseladams.com
A contest entry
- Rise Today! by Acidanthra.
800 points, ended March 3, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The last stanza really stood out for me. We all need to look deep inside before we can begin to see what needs to be done by ourselves personally in order to get the benefit of any change that we may be hoping for. Time may be of the essence, however, it would be well worth the effort.
Well done, I did enjoy reading this.
Katie
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more truth. that's what's up. i like the choppiness..it reads like thoughts driftin in and out. yes...we have to change ourselves to change the world.
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Airee. The room for improvement is always the biggest room and the man in the mirror needs to be the first working architect. Love your form as usual. I pray this message is received by all who chance upon it.
One Love,
John
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Nice piece of work
Smooth flowing taking responsibility and that seems to be a lost art in itself. A fine explicit, honest and uncorrupted work of art. My pleasure to read it.
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Haqq-The Truth Powerful
You have brought the truth in few words and that is a good thing because we have very little time and most of us are decieved and we think we will live forever godless and happy with gold coins called euros or some other invention. The solution is given here to all the worlds problems. You have done your job OH messenger well written well given well done.
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I love this form and the flow was lovely big sis!
peace and love
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Wow!!!
This is simply and profoundly the truth. Perception is everything ,"for as a man thinkith so is he." If people would act on this and help others by living the golden rule of love. We would begin to apply salve to our brothers and sisters wounds instead of marveling at anothers suffering. I shall continue to pray the prayer of Jabez and trust in the rewarder of my faith.
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Careful in what you change
Something about you we may like best. There are certaint thing about each other one holds on to because it makes you -you...mac
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I feel you on this and agree with this write. you have such a depth of perception that is such an awesome gift and skill. thanx. conni
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Great job
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Well done. One.
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"No reason for this world to change,
best elements is All I see.
It's humans that must rearrange,
need time to seek changes in Me."
Excellent...and so true! Change starts from within ... and radiates outward. Best of luck in the contest!
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PERFECT!
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