What is it about you?
That inspires love so true
Is it your hair?
Making you so fair
I can't seem to decide
This attraction deep inside
To my very soul
It is my heart you stole
Is it what's in your head?
Causing this passion instead
No I don't think so
What is it though?
I now think I know
What makes you seem to glow
It is your very soul it seems
Seen through your eyes, our love gleams
In a list
A contest entry
- PIf Quickie by creationsfromheart.
430 points, ended February 18, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice and light
Your writing has an efervescence that leaves one satisfied, and want to come back and sample some more.
You may like some of my poetry which speaks of the soul.
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This is such a sweet love poem... a poem of praising through contemplation.... very beautifully written
It is your very soul it seems
Seen through your eyes, our love gleams
I love the ending... it closes perfectly
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Thank you
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you are welcome
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Yes what it it about love and what does really attract us to another. Fame, fortune, beauty? Maybe all for some. For others perhaps just the heart of the person. Or could even be great legs. My chioce.
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Aw! This is such a nice love poem! I especially like -
"I now think I know
What makes you seem to glow
It is your very soul it seems"
SO sweet! I love the way you like her soul - it's becoming more and more rare to find soul-based love instead of looks-based love these days.
I love this.
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great
what a lovely poem
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Thank you
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I love it!
This is so beautiful. It really gives a new meaning to "the eyes are the windows to the soul". I really love this one. Keep it up, man.
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i loved this piece...innocent yet strong..full of emotions..
great write..
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very awsome, many people can think this way about one another and just arnt qite sure what it is that attracts them to that person and yet never figures it out, they just know that they are. I think you described this very well, i can just picture someonesitting there thinking about it, yet another great write
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Awhh! this is beautiful steve LOVE it!
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Well Done
Well-Written & Versed! Very easily read!
Congratulations on the Bronze!
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thank you
-Steve-
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aw gesh now I feel all warm and fuzzy inside, I think the cat contest made me feel fuzzy but this one made me feel warm great write Good luck!
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Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it yeah the cat contest was fun
-Steve-
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A lovely piece of thought on the prompt itself. More sincere and filled with adoration than all else. Nice write!
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Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it
-Steve-
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This is beautiful - you must be a true romantic. Beautifully penned - best of luck
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Thank you for such a nice comment and yes I like to think that I am
-Steve-
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Very nice Dear Good luck with this
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thank you
-Steve-
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