I sit out on the porch swing
my thoughts they drift to you
wondering if you think of me
cuz I sure think of you
though we live apart
so many miles away
a part of me is with you
each and everyday
before I choose to end this
I thought that you should know
I hold a soft spot in my heart
for you're my AP beau.
Author notes
I wrote this for Titus, who is my best friend on Allpoetry. ( I chose OPTION # 1)
A contest entry
- Anything goes.... by Rita Krocha.
450 points, ended May 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Something vaguely about friends... by i-love-my-bra.
450 points, ended June 18, 2008, 39 entries
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1000 points, ended June 30, 2008, 160 entries
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380 points, ended July 22, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I want readers to give me honest feedback and any suggestions you may have.
Comments
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nice =]
i've never seen anyone write a poem ABOUT AP lol...
it's good to have such a good friend, isn't it?
thanks for entering
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i think this is a wonderful tribute to a great friend, i know titus too, he is a wonderful poet and always seems to place better then i do in all the contests we both enter, he is a great friend. this poem flows well and says so much, good luck in all the contests you enter this poem into, and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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I just love this!!! It's perfect in every way. I can feel the warmth as I read it.
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the friendship is felt through out your poem
the way you care for your friend
best of luck to you with this
Riftkin
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Very sweet poem for your friend.
I think the mention of AP (no matter how much we love it) detracts and had me crashing back to earth after floating on clouds. -
A love story spelled out perfectly, in very few words. I like it.
MAXBOY -
Honesty is the best policy
I sit out on the porch swing
my thoughts they drift to you
wondering if you think of me
cuz I sure think of you
These are my favorite lines. I love it. This is the sweetest poem ever. It lit me up the moment I started reading it. It is so amazing.
Thank you for sharing it with me.
Good luck in the contest.
This is a lovely contribution.
Have a great day.
God bless.
~Only1love4ever -
good luck, i like that its so sweet and it shows how you have an emotional connection with this person. i like the way you rhymed know and beau (i think they rhyme anyhoo XD)
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Awww short and sweet. Easy to read
Thanks for the entry.
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Ah, this is so very sweet. It is so nice to have an AP beau. I enjoyed this read very much. Well written.
Kelli -
Great job with this..I see your AP beau loves it ..wish you luck guys
Amarige
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Lovely thoughts are all there is to know, and the fact is, the sentiments usually because of understanding, respect for each other and the most important one, caring. There are lovely and an exceptionally heartfelt feelings, You are a magical woman,
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I meant every word in this poem. You have been such an inspiration to me.
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