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it's getting onto warmer weather
if you can survive the fall
planting inkspout trees in winter
write your name on every wall

driving south toward broader streets
fast lane passes, exit 9
never knowing where we're going
yet we get there every time

to find a decent love song
it's harder than it looks
so i'm writing you a love song
in sharpie in my spiral book

looking at the crystal sky
it seems a thousand shadows tall
wish i had a sharpie army
write your name on every wall

lowfat drugs and fake diseases
baby take my other hand
don't you know the simplest things
are the hardest to understand

sometimes feeling love is harder
than always feeling rage
so i'm writing you a love song
in sharpie for my myspace page

to find a decent love song
is harder than it seems
so when i write my own reality
it's better than my dreams

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  • A falling star
    March 5, 2008
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    aw, I like it. Great job.
    Thanks for entering!
    -Sonya