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Dearest Spring

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Long awaited Friend,

why do you take so long to recreate my garden's soul?

 

 

 

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photo taken from http://www.fallingstar.net/awakened/entries/pics/070407snow09_forsythia.jpg

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  • Micro
    March 4, 2008

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    Oh, this is perfect, just perfect. I loved it. No wonder you won Gold for this one. The words were perfect, the thought behind the words were perfect and the pic and background complimented the poem to the max. WOW!


  • twinkling of an eye
    March 2, 2008
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    So simple and poignant!


  • MargaretG
    March 1, 2008

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    Lovely! You have written with depth and communicated a great longing for the change of season.
    Congratulations!


  • Lyndon gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    I accept this as a line

    I love rhetorical questions that get to the heart of the matter.


  • Melodies
    February 25, 2008

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    A beautiful thought posed as a question to springtime... A personal acquaintance with springtime is implied and done so with a fine touch. ++

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