Whispered reverence
in the kisses lining her calves
smooth and supple white.
Worshipful lips
and soft touch of tongue
venerate slender, scented feet.
Soft liquid rush
to decidedly female parts
pulsing in the dark.
Deep, dark eyes gazing up
demurely
into the pale pools of his Mistress
adored, sweet-faced vessel,
his eternal cup and wine,
cleansing her with his slow
and devoted kisses
and the baptism of his sweat.
And what yielding gush is this?
that escapes from between
her delicately parted petals,
soaked silk.
Fragile fingers knotting in his hair
holding him in place
as moist, tender lips traverse jawline
and what he wants hovers just
an inch away,
her tongue dampening his lips
and darting between them
as over and over again
they mouth "Please?"
His worshipful lips
and soft touch of tongue
to his ripe and tempestuous paramour
brings a soft liquid rush
from decidedly female parts
pulsing in the dark....
Author notes
The delicate balance between a Mistress and the one who worships her.
A contest entry
- Please excite me. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended March 12, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Yes?
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I've never been a fan of sensual reads.
But if I was, this would be my favorite peace, hands down. Very nice, and very memorable...
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Beautifully written here, very trancing and enjoyable, thus hot. Another piece that the first 3 lines captivate me. Well done.
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really dig "smooth and supple white"..."the baptism of his sweat"-brilliant and so hot!...vivid imagery that is so...uplifting.lol...an excellent piece!
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Such a splendid penning indeed.
The imagery speeks in volumes wonderfully done
Great feel and effect leaves me wanting more
Pulsing in the dark BRAVO!!!
Thanks for sharing this poem.
Tony
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The only reality we know is the one we create, outside that nothing exists.
<3
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Simply amazing
Perfect descriptions, very very sensual. My mouth is watering at the thought. You never fail to amaze me baby, this was simply perfect, i'll worship you for all eternity
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Wow... This is incredible! So very sensual and written with a smoky sultry style that adds even more spice to the wonderful imagery. You have outdone yourself this time dear friend! Bravo!
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