Forest branches wind motion crowns
blowing mountain skylines brush tip silhouettes
painting lunar renditions tree shadow gowns
into starlight ballets moon-bow pirouettes
of
coruscate stars
dancing moon meadow dreams.
Author notes
word Prompt: Lunar Dreams
30 words or less
In a list
A contest entry
- 30 Words by Seeking Peace.
450 points, ended February 19, 2008, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse by JessTheMess.
330 points, ended March 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh My!!
Beautiful weaving of words to bring forth images and emotions from the ink You spilled
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Love these lines~
painting lunar renditions tree shadow gowns
into starlight ballets moon-bow pirouettes
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Glorious, there is nothing better than the scene you have placed in my mind right now... wow, speechless....
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck
Karen -
Moon dreams filter as dancing pirouettes playful move across the night skyI did start this comment early this morning but had to leave...I see your trademark style and language a signature to your work...Imagery beautifully expressed as you draw your readers into your lines thank you ... good luck in the contest.
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Where is my dictionary people? Got to look for some words but I have the feeling that this poem is not your run-of-the-mill stuff. Keep it up!
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Very kind compliment Lorot
Thank you very much for your kind words of encouragement.
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