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Dancing Moonlight Dreams

Forest branches wind motion crowns
blowing mountain skylines brush tip silhouettes
painting lunar renditions tree shadow gowns
into starlight ballets moon-bow pirouettes

                of
      
coruscate stars

dancing moon meadow dreams.

 

  


  




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word Prompt: Lunar Dreams
30 words or less

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A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    Oh My!!

    Beautiful weaving of words to bring forth images and emotions from the ink You spilled

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Love these lines~
    painting lunar renditions tree shadow gowns
    into starlight ballets moon-bow pirouettes

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    Glorious, there is nothing better than the scene you have placed in my mind right now... wow, speechless....

    Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen


  • dustookie2
    February 18, 2008
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    Moon dreams filter as dancing pirouettes playful move across the night skyI did start this comment early this morning but had to leave...I see your trademark style and language a signature to your work...Imagery beautifully expressed as you draw your readers into your lines thank you ... good luck in the contest.

  • Lorot
    February 18, 2008

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    Where is my dictionary people? Got to look for some words but I have the feeling that this poem is not your run-of-the-mill stuff. Keep it up!


    • Roaddog Wolf
      February 19, 2008
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      Very kind compliment Lorot

      Thank you very much for your kind words of encouragement.

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