Hearts are torn and thrown away
Overcome this brutal pain
Manage to come back every day
Enough to make me run away.
A contest entry
- Accrostic Poems Please! Come on guys! by PonyPride.
500 points, ended February 18, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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hmmm.. interesting but does this really tie into home? dont see it
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here ill explain the lines
Hearts are torn and thrown away
-my parents divorced
Overcome this brutal pain
-my mom didn't treat me well.at all
Manage to come back every day
-because i was all that she had
Enough to make me run away.
- i eventually moved out because i didnt deserve being treated that wway
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oh I am very sory and thank you for the explanation, perhaps you could have added some somehow to your poem
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well.
everyone expieriences something differant at home.
tha was my personal home expierience.
no two households are the same and your life might not be like mine was.
i guess it depends on what your home is like
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