May you hang me in effigy
with the blood of my viens
displayed as ink upon my flesh.
Author notes
I really wanted to elaborate on this but since its to be last words, kept it short as expected.
A contest entry
- 1 of 13 Challenges [Rounds, if you will]. by Naridill.
450 points, ended February 18, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good
it was short... but i liked it i wish that it was longer i think you could do so much with it it has a lot of potental.. i liked the ink and i feel like you could expand it so much i dont mean to seem rude or anything i like it but..
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Wow - extreme and vivid. The imagery is painted with such extremeness. Nicely done.
Thanks for entering,



