Ricardo no, don't leave me!
Oh yes mi amoré, the time has come!
My love for you will never falter!
Always, my heart grows fonder, but it is another woman that I love.
No! I will not concede you leaving me, my heart grows weary!
Carmen, mi amoré, the woman I love is not human, she is...animal.
....Excuse me?
Author notes
A unique twist to a corny soap-opera drama. In acrostic form of course.
A contest entry
- Accrostic Poems Please! Come on guys! by PonyPride.
500 points, ended February 18, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Some people have no imagination and have only one track minds. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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*confuzled* hmm .. this was interesting... but not very much like a poem.. nice try though, it was unique
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it saddens me that you are too naive as to understand different variations of acrostic poems. i clearly followed all of your rules, and if you weren't able to understand the pretense of my poem, then that is of your own accord.
*sigh*
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