i saw you when you were invisible,
when no one saw you for who you are.
when no one loved you for very long,
and left you with nothing but another scar.
i saw you when no one else did.
and when they pushed past you in the hall,
i was there to give you my hand
and help you up when you'd fall.
i saw you when he said "goodbye",
and my shoulder was there for you to cry.
but then you'd get up and find another guy,
and leave my heart to die.
so here's my question
if you'll riddle me this.
it's a simple question,
and your blind if it's missed.
did you ever see me?
A contest entry
- Painful Desires by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1000 points, ended March 6, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Dayum....a strong feeling that many people feel I'm sure..Especially within in the high school setting. Finding that lost soul and reaching out, but it's in vain if they didn't see you.
Mylee -
wow powerful entry,
i love it,
it shows deep pain and care,
unfortunatly humanity has turned into a bitter thing,
theres rare few good people in one area nowerdays,
but still there are still good people out there,
good luck in the contest,
love vamp xxx
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