I am just a pawn in your immorality
Author notes
blondone
Prompt:I want one line, a hard-hitting, filled with emotion line. No more no less, just one line across the page about anything you desire just make me want to award you these points!
I want you to make me feel, scare me, love me, make me cry, scream, anything,
'The line of my life'
A contest entry
- ONE LINE-ONE CHANCE by Georgia La Mariposa.
375 points, ended February 20, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is great really powerful
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You have written a very powerful one liner. There is alot of truth to that temptation can draw us in when we least expect it. Excellent write!! Best of luck in the contest. You take care and have a wonderful day. Sandy
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