So I must live with clenched emotions,
Unbeknownst to my actions that speak louder than screams.
A congregation of hate simultaneously inflates,
And I swallow the bile that glides around at the seams.
The louder you speak, surely the more I can hear,
Yet my understanding dissolves into a pulpy mess of confusion.
A limbless body hanging upside down from a tree,
I just swing in a breeze of pure cretinous disillusion
My ears ring from your dark and clueless noise,
I slowly rot from the inside and become a zombie of innocent hate.
As the cracks appear, my pores ooze with anger,
And everything in close proximity meets it's hideously painful fate.
Bleeding from the nose and ears,
Eyes blurry with bloody tears,
I condense my mighty frustration into one simple vomiting session.
Bleeding from the nose and ears,
Eyes blurry with bloody tears,
Life on this planet is increasingly reducing all of my progression.
All my life, nothing but puke.
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your choices of words are amazing. liked it alot. life on this planet...yeah..its always reducing...but not the pain, desperation and frustration. nice work.
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OMG.. You are seriously my hero. I think you've been my fave for like the past five year lol..
This is so full of EVERYTHING... It's utterly, overly BA status.
"clenched emotions"... I love it.
When you write, is it just like.. free writing or do you sit down & think about it? I've always wondered that...
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Thank you very much! Sometimes I do just spill stuff out onto the page like a crazy vomiting man, but other times I'll just scribble ideas on paper then pick out the good juicy parts. Anyhoo, gotta run. Ain't read your stuff in a while so I'll bust back onto your page in a bit.
Have fun!
-Joshh
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Limbless body eh? THALIDOMIDE STUMP BOY.
"I condense my mighty frustration into one simple vomiting session."
ahahahahaha probably a good idea. Get the anger out... literally.
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