[Click the keys in agitation.]
You were never here,
How can you be gone at all
Dahling?
You were my perfect lover and
The perfect gentleman,
The like of which I’d never known before
[Throw you away like this paper’s predecessors]
Sweets,
You loved me.
But falling for a trainwreck is only gonna
x.Leave you.x
As twisted as my
[BurningSheetMetalHeart]
Back on my tracks
[Flashback baby]
Back to him,
My former beau
[Bastard ex.]
He makes me so miserable
[I’m happy.]
It’s where I belong.
pretty
[dirty]
love
[hate]
[crazy.painful.mixed up]
VOID
My worst break up never really happened.
It’s all in your head.
[you could never have had me.]
Author notes
Written 18.2.08
Option 7. -Write about the worst break up you ever had.
A contest entry
- She Sits On The Underside Of The Umbrella In The Pouring Rain. by LucyLightning.
450 points, ended February 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is awesome.
i love it.
kicktastic.
it reminds me of the thoughts that randomly circle through my head.
=DDD
finalist.

