the Grass is always greener, but once
you've jumped the Fence, discarded assets Essence
with regret, shall recommence
tis easy to Precipitate- embrace this
winter rain. now for a change evaporate
this evidence of pain
can one remain in summer's Light? resist
Escaping into night? eventually all things must
end- if only to Begin again
Author notes
the title has no meaning- I number my poems
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- The Journey......... by child of grace.
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This is beautiful. I love the rhyme scheme, this just flows out perfectly. Great poem, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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the background is driving me crazy...
but the poem is absolutely brilliant to read.
thanks for entering this!
Cheers,
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Very beautifully written here... I loved every line. It just seems so... Deep and wisdom filled ~
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I loved this, I have missed your writing so much. I love the slight discomfort in the piece with the use of such powerful word, love the metaphor of rain and pain. Well done!!!
good job!
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WHIMSICAL DELIGHTFUL AND BEAUTIFUL WRITEN. GOD BLESS
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