I’m hungry.
My appetite
hungry for
your infatuation.
Thirsty,
needing
your passionate
lascivious fury.
Absorb me,
lick
satin skin,
delicately bite
hard nipple
on breast,
blow,
tease.
I am
Your tasty
morsel,
tonight.
Magical hands
bring
my heated
being
to its true essence,
letting waves
of ecstasy
flow.
Bodies come together
curious hands
grab,
squeeze,
pinch and delight.
His hardness
Rocking…
My world
Our dimensions
parallel.
In a list
A contest entry
- Expressing Your Poetic Feelings by D Saul So Sexy.
550 points, ended March 31, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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dayum you took everything i felt for this lady because yo she drives me out my mind crzy yo i like this thanks for entering
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hunger
I liked this piece and the way it veered away from the title.
perhaps you could have even put more images to do with different kinds of hunger at the start of the poem and worked up to the erotisism...Just a suggestion for you to use or lose (lose probably, lol).
best wishes,
BJ.
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I agree BJ, I feel the metaphor use etc in the begining there has much to grow into it that eroticness could be grown on..I will keep looking at it
Thanks for your suggestion
Cin
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Wonderful free flowing piece with imagery of passionate lust. I think it's the simple structure that adds so much to the flow.
Love,
Amera
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Thanks you so much
Cin
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A deeply passionate piece very creatively expressed with HOT erotic imagery dancing with excitement upon the senses of the reader
A good piece Cin... a pleasure to read.
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Thank you my friend..exaclty what I wanted..passionate, deeply but with some hot eroticness in there
Cin
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Oh damn... I was not expecting this... but I LOVE it! The way you totally threw me off with the title and then just all of a sudden hit me with this erotic piece, very nicely done. Love a good surprise especially when it's done well.
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lol exactly why I tried for creativity, sneakiness on the title lol
Thanks Tarj, glad you liked it
Cindy
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"I am
Your tasty
morsel,
tonight.
Magical hands
bring
my heated
being
to its true essence,
letting waves
of ecstasy
flow."
Loved this little bit, and the rest for that matter.
Love and peace,
mj.
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Thanks MJ
CIndy
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Oh my goodness, I know that mood, sweetheart. I hope Matt still has plenty of energy when he gets home from work
You played with your words beautifully and they send out a message of desire and passion unparalleled by anything I've read recently. You are so good, Baby Girl.
Love always
Mum 
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he's home, yay lol
I just felt like writing & it came differently for once hehehe, not complaining of course.
Your comments so encourage me, thank you for loving my gift, for being proud
Love u Mum
Cin
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