Spiraling smiles
break the routine
as he interrupts the
absence of time
with the absence
of the name.
giggling meaninglessness
laughs in the face of
bent annoyance –
waiting on cooling
tea to tell the story.
Trademarks colour
tilted teeth,
tormenting the
half-full
half-empty
half-there.
Author notes
Written for a challenge;
Write a poem about the Mad Hatter's hat as taken by the Cheshire Cat without using the words 'hat' or cat'.
Issued by Vigilant Grifter
In a list
A contest entry
- Absolute Nonsense! by marciakay81.
525 points, ended June 4, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty would be lovely
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absolute madness! thank you for your entry.
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I can't pick my favourite line as this just rips through my mind and demands I pay attention!
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Stay safe
~Manda
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Oh la la. Challenge met m'dear, challenge met.
I especially love the lines "Half full, half empty, half there" Very entertaining, very well written. Truly well done. Truly.
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Well thank you very much
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Excellent
Very creative and well express. So well crafted and skillful. Thank you for sharing.
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half-shock yet full admiration.
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This was amazing.
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~standing and clapping~
EXCELLENT!
lmao! You and your Alice ~shaking head~
I am certain that you loved doing this one almost as much as I loved reading it!
well done my friend, you have DEFINITELY risen to the challenge!!!
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Maybe just a little.
Thank you very much
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