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Jesus Christ

Justifying, His blood we see
Emancipating humanity
Sin to conquer through purity

Uplifting us that there might be
Salvation through His Victory.

Come to earth from heaven above
Here to show the Father's Love
Righteousness in word and deed
Instructing lowly man in need
Son of God, Beloved and Blessed

To secure us Heaven's Best!

 

A contest entry

point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!

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  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    February 22, 2008

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    a very fine ACROSTIC last two lines excellent thanks for sharing regards zaj [perhaps change 'emancipating' in 2nd line to just EMANCIPATES'? more immediate? yes/no?]


    • MassMan
      February 22, 2008
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      Thank you for your comments and suggestion.
      I think Emancipates may be more immediate, as you suggest- but as with Justifying, Emancipating shows an ongoing action proceeding from the shedding of His blood. So, while you made a good point, I think I will leave it as it is.
      Thanks for your imput,
      David


  • PonyPride
    February 19, 2008

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    wow I just love this. I really just want to like hang it on my wall. You deserve an A+++++ lol. Just reminding you, excellent job. I just read it to my bf and he loved it to. u should submit it to a church.


  • z etoile
    February 18, 2008
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    Awesome job

    • MassMan
      February 18, 2008
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      Thank You MJ-- poems of praise and adoration are my speciality-near & dear to my heart as the One I am praising!
      Thank you for your kind remark about this poem.
      David


  • PonyPride
    February 18, 2008
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    100%

    WOW this is amazing. EXCELLENT. i love this so very much, it was a beautiful peice

    • MassMan
      February 18, 2008
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      Thank you PonyPride for hosting such a contest as this where the Lord CAN be praised. Thank You so much for the Gold trophy win and points. I would be willing to rweturn back the Points, if you would like to host another Contest. Just let me know.
      Thanks so much-The LORD be Praised!
      David

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