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The Call of Spring

Flowers unfold colours;trees shoot buds; wings and paws dance at Spring's return.

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  • xox-emma-xox
    April 4, 2008

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    Very well done! You captured all the emotions in such a short writting! Well done! Check out my contest! It is a nature contest called Nature Nuts
    Emma ^_^


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    EVER SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    Yes, all comes alive with the coming of warmer weather in the spring.


  • MargaretG
    March 1, 2008

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    I like the active verbs, especially "trees shoot buds". The excitement is subdued, but palpable.
    Congratulations!


  • Lyndon gold member
    February 29, 2008
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    "Flowery" language

    reminding me of Bambi, a bit and being twitterpated.


  • Melodies
    February 25, 2008

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    Awww... the mention of wings and paws melts my heart for the image of them dancing is so precious. BRAVO! The verbs in this poem are so well chosen.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    February 21, 2008

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    Hi Mum. You definitely captured the beauty of spring. Vivid descriptives. You paint a delightful word picture in this one line about springtime. Best wishes in the contest.


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    February 18, 2008
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    truly beautiful thoughts of spring, I relish the thoughts, good luck Grams...
    much love...Moonie


  • Purush
    February 18, 2008
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    LOVELY

    BEAUTIFUL!!!
    AN ODE TO THE QUEEN OF SEASONS

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