I remember
I remember cruel nights
Full of night lies
You were
There
Full of blissful words
You heard
But didn't see
Your true intentions
Full of my past
To be
Always a loyal friend
To one
But not
The other to me
Loyal to the one
Corrupt and full
Of blackness
But my flame
Dies
Burnt out and asunder
In your delectable
Worldly plunder
Everyone to see
And not save
Everyone to live
And let die
I cried
For you to live
I died
For you to forget
I will never forget
Author notes
Why do the people that you put your heart into the most just always shit on you and only really truly care about themselves? Why do i always claim that person to be my best friend time and time again?
A contest entry
- Best Frenemies... by AllYoullNeverHave.
600 points, ended March 15, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I felt your pain when reading your poem. I what it feels like to have someone you thought was a friend betray you. This poem summed it up perfectly.
I know that this is a hard time for you, but always remember I am here.
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This is good. Really good. Definitely fits the contest. I can relate so well too.
"I cried
For you to live
I died
For you to forget
I will never forget "
This is my favorite part. A great way to end this piece. And for the answers to your questions... I cannot answer, for I ask the same thing! Great job and good luck!
♥AllYoullNeverHave -
Wow... I new before I finished reading this who you were talking about... this is very dark.. and at some parts a little difficult to follow.. but over all it really hit a note in me.. maybe it's because I understand what you are going through..
Jessa♥
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wow...powerful poem
Excellently done
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