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Spring At Last

Love-seeds sprout on decayed dreams, grow tall, bloom in fragrant hopes...

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  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    the best one liner

    I've ever had the pleasure of reading!
    Brilliant, ripe with vivid imagery, and yet only one line!
    I'm envious! I could never do this.


  • Melodies
    February 25, 2008

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    OH! A pang of springtime love! Wonderful metaphors growing in this beautiful poetic garden. ++


  • rhondasail
    February 20, 2008

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    Wow, Jose...I can feel the pull of the sun in these succinct words...well done! Best of luck. Peace, Rhonda


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 20, 2008
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    great immagery...