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Revelation

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Bursting forth, Spring utters Divinity in birdsong, blooms and fragrant breezes.

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  • MargaretG
    March 1, 2008

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    Yay! The order of the universe is self-evident.
    Congratulations for your HM!


  • Lyndon gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    For sheer enthusiasm

    and beauty, I love this poetic line.


  • Melodies
    February 25, 2008

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    Profound beauty found in your words. I gather them up like a spring bouquet.


  • PerVirtuous
    February 19, 2008
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    Very nice.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    SPRING IS MY FAVORITE TIME OF YEAR WHEN THE EARTH IS RENEWED, FLOWERS ARE IN BLOOM IT IS A COLORFUL AWAKENING. BEAUTIFUL DESCRIPTION JUST VIBRANT. GOD BLESS


  • Ladybug
    February 18, 2008

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    now hurry up and get here
    I am sick of the cold and wind of Winter

    Tamara


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    Just beautiful! Every word full of life. All the best with this
    Gaylene


  • maa gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    your inspiring words reflect with beauty what is happening here where I am : my little bird is jumping all over me, singing and chirping, the mimosas are blooming outside my windows spreading their hypnotizing perfume, and my soul is filled with joy ...

    love you,

    marion

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