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My Best Friend Is Poetry....



Over 100 poems later,
  And I'm still getting by
      Each one tells the truth,
        Not one tells a lie.



Do you want to know,
  The secrets i have kept?
      Just read through the poems,
        That I wrote when i should of slept


Writer's Block has come,
  But never stayed too long.
      Poetry; it keeps me,
        Always forever strong!


I don't know where I'd be,
  If this gift was never found.
      Perhaps curled up in the corner.
        Never making a sound...




i am truely grateful,
  for the girl i've grown to be.
      For i have found my a smile
        as the result of my poetry...


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i dunno, this is a different one for me... but i guess different isnt bad. i feel like its a bit corney :S what do you think?

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  • Lonely Christina
    May 27, 2008
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    wow this is exactly how i feel! good job

  • virtual-darkness
    February 21, 2008

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    honey this is one of the most upbeat and uplifting and honest poems i have ever read. it makes complete sense and does not sound corny at all. i feel exactlty how this poem is worded and written. i really like the use of words and the flow of words. i also love 2,4 rhyme. that means lines 2 and 4 rhyme. in case you were unaware. anyways i love the last stanza "i am truely grateful,
    for the girl i've grown to be.
    For i have found my a smile
    as the result of my poetry..."

    well done. nice write. awesome as.

    stay safe and take care of yourself.
    xoxo


  • x-x-x-x-x
    February 20, 2008

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    *lots of applause* damn I have no points to applaud you lol, but I would if I could!

  • x-x-x-x-x
    February 20, 2008
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    This is great sweetie, I love it! I'm so glad that poetry has helped you like it has, and I'm so glad you chose AP to share your poems else I'd never have met you! I love you babe


  • Lost In Dreaming
    February 18, 2008

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    I love it--it fits with how I feel about my poetry nad how its helped me get through everything--I guess writting down poems at two or three a.m. is more common then I'd realized


    • hopelessly-broken
      February 20, 2008
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      i am glad u loved it
      lol, the best writting comes out at early hours of the morning. im glad poety helps you too! i love it, without it i truely dont no where i'd be, or if id ever be alive....

      take care, and peace out
      love HB
      xoxoxox


  • XXirishroseXX
    February 18, 2008

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    I really like this, because it is SO true! i started writing all the time when I became depressed and it really helped not just does it get out your frustrations by giving you something to focus on, when you realize you're kinda good at it it cheers you up.

    • hopelessly-broken
      February 20, 2008
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      it means alot that you liked this one... poetry used to be my release becuase im not too good at tlaking to people when something is rong but i needed to vent somehow, so practically all my poetry has an angry or depressed feel to it. but now it seems that the majority of the past that bothered me has been delt with, and now i can move onto more cheerful and inspiering poetry.
      it makes you feel more confident in writting when other ppl read it and say they like it fomr a completely un bias opinion, and then u start realise that maybe your writting is good... so u keep going
      lol

      anyways take care and peace out
      love HB
      xoxox

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