I look upon the heavens
watching drifting clouds above
containing all the beauty
our creator gave with love.
These thoughts are very vivid in my mind.
I know the way we live our lives
determines our own fate.
I pray the life I'm living
will lead to heaven's gate.
The "Pillars to the sky" for me to climb!
Author notes
A hope that we are pleasing to His eyes.
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How would you judge your own life?
Comments
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This is so beautiful....
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BEAUTIFUL SOULFUL WRITE. SHOWS KEEN AWARENESS OF OUR CREATOR AND HIS LAWS OF THE UNIVERSE. EXCELLENT GOD BLESS


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A truly beautiful, spiritual write. Thanks so much for this gorgeous entry

Gaylene
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Reminded me i have to live a righteous life. Thanx for the srpirit lifter







