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sweet inocence[beware adult content]

against your bed your heart skips
i feel your lips like morphine,
intoxicate my ruby lips,
I feel your hands upon my body,
as my fingertips caress those hips,
i feel your knees go weak beneath me,
as my kisses trail down your neck you hear your shirt rips,
i take out a blindfold and put it you so you cant see,
but the light inside of me goes out like an eclipse,
i remove your shirt and unclasp your bra,
my kisses move along your breasts,
to your breast my tongue swirls,
then against your nipple my tongue twirls,
it circles and circles till fully aroused,
then to the left nipple till your desire is browsed...

back up the bed i get some chains,
you hear the rattle then your heart races again,
the cold steel bounds your hands,
and to the headboard you feel as if your body's rising but you don't want to hit land,
you thought such excitement was banned,
because you always listened to daddy's command,
but sweet little angel listen to my demand,
i want you to relax, close your eyes,
this pleasure has no lies, no demise...

i kiss down your chest to your waist line,
as i remove your pants,shivers go up your spine,
down i go, kissing my way,
looking at you so innocently you lay,
as in your mind you never want me to go away,
my kisses hit your thigh,
and with them your passionate sigh,
i remove your panties,
and kiss along your inner thigh,
before biting down oh so hard,
as you moan and cry out sending you high,
i sink my fangs in,
sending your head in a spin,
the pain and pleasure both combine,
as your body becomes mine,

i release the bite and kiss your pussy,
before running my tongue up and down,
round and round,
tasting all your Lucious juices, as you never want to hit the ground,
then with my tongue enters you,
probing and pushing sending you to new heights,
near climax you moan, and cry out,as i whisper "no fights or ill make new bites"
you grip your chains with all your grip,
as if to a weapon you were about to equip,
as you scream out my name,
your heaven comes,as your heart races,set aflame...

then i get up you still breathing heavy,

release the chains,

with a sweet whisper "we shall do this again"
for now i shall leave you my sweet heaven angel,
but tomorrow will be new heights,
so sleep well tonight...

Author notes

sexy enough
hope ye like,
took me ages,
not wrote something like before,
was fun though,
love you all,
Elektra xxx

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  • Dark Otter
    February 7
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    Hi woman!

    This is erotica at its best! I love how this fantasy plays in my jead.

  • everytime i read it i still get chills


  • Rhythm Child
    January 5
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    certainly kept me on my toes lol


  • Andiness
    December 17, 2008
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    no fights or ill make new bites


    WOW love it!!!


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    Lol woah... this is beautiful, in its way... wow... like, woah... heh... very well done...


  • BeautifulDisaster1
    June 27, 2008
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    Ughh amazing job!! Now that is something I could read all day everyday!! I envy you!!


  • movedon
    June 24, 2008
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    whoa is it hot in here or is it just you??????????

    Mylee *thumbsup*


  • Poetic Obscenity
    June 5, 2008

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    Lesbians and Vampyres, Anything better? haha
    I loved it, That was an amazing write i've got to say!!
    Get my heart pounding and my thighs closed tight. ^.^

    You have such a way with words and of keeping people enticed.
    I've got to say, i'm definitly intrigued.

    Wonderful. <333

  • arroxy1982
    April 26, 2008

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    wow

    WOW... That made me wet that is the most senstual beautiful poem. WOW now i am ready for some of that to happen to me. Where are the handcuffs?


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    April 6, 2008
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    Wow!

    I can freely admit my dear Sweetest Sweetems that this was quite a pulse pounding write. ya know how tog et our blood flowing through out our body. Mghty impressive write though for this style of write is often hard and I know because I rarily write adult poems. any ways this was full of action & just enough suspense & thrillment to get your hormones going @ the ide aof being placed through such pleasurement. any ways excellent write and keep it up congratulations on Silver not suprised you won it


  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    March 11, 2008
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    WOW

    Makes me wish to be a lesbian, fantasticly erotic and powerful poem. Well done xx

  • Sam Is I
    March 6, 2008
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    That was hot you need to write more

  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 29, 2008

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    Wow

    Well I just clicked thr fitst poem link I saw and well landed across this one and whew * wipes the steam off his glasses * * dabs his face to take the sweat away * you really made it a very graphic but bautifully done erotic poem! I will admit you managed tog et my heart to beat a bit faster as your wording realy sent images of that through out ones head. Kudos to the fact that you penned such a strong well desired poem of this quality and I enjoyed this veryrare erotic poem. nice job all rodn with your wording images portrayed and structure was true. any ways keep up the Grrrrrrrrrreat work as always


  • misfit messiah
    February 22, 2008

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    you just gave me a few ideas to use while im in the bedroom , very intense and sexual but still has your own since of beauty in it


  • Love til Deaths end
    February 21, 2008

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    This is fucking incredible. I absolutely love it. It wow. Its breathless. And damn it turned me on. This has to be the sexiest fucking poem ever. I love it. Very very well done. Amazing work my love.


  • Galaxy2
    February 20, 2008
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    Wow!
    It's such fun that I would wish that to happen to me!...So wonderfully lustful...sinful...all pleasure...nothing but pleasure...and the end is so
    enticing...so seductive...

    With a swee whisper "We shall do this again."
    I'll write more later..Kisses for now...all over, cutie!

    Gaklaxy2


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    February 20, 2008

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    kinky but very very... well... it was good. great write. i almost felt as if it were me gripping those chains.


  • oTazZo
    February 19, 2008
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    LOVE IT!!!!!

    this is why your my fav poet on this site

  • in-the-twilight
    February 18, 2008

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    wow... this is extremely... kinky... lol... I like it... it was amazing and good luck in your contest. meg


  • HaileeDear
    February 18, 2008

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    DAAAMN

    great work. you explained every detail wonderfully. im so glad you decided to enter!! i knew i wouldn't be let down. the words you used flowed and kept me reading. not once did you bore me. you are truly wonderful!! :]
    xoxo
    pixie


  • Bataran
    February 18, 2008
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    good job darling

    so well written. darling. your poetry is so honest. i just love it. so easy to understand


  • Commonsuicide
    February 18, 2008
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    thats powerful


  • SexySerenity
    February 18, 2008
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    Holy.Sh$*!!I loved it.excellent work Elektra.


  • vampire.lust.death
    February 18, 2008
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    ........WOW I LOVED IT

    well first time i got a ......well yea when i read a poem i am am at los of words


  • Rane
    February 18, 2008

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    Excellent work as usual Bri. Very hot. Any chance this was inspired by Carmilla Karnstein? If not perhaps you should check the story out, something tells me you might like it.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carmilla


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    Wow, this was pretty cool... Normally lesbian stuff [I prefer m/m] is not my thing, but this was very well written... I actually shocked myself when I wrote a lesbian erotica at SW and won gold with it... I definitely think you should be in the top 3 with this too Great job!

    ♥ Laura xxx


  • X ace of spades X
    February 18, 2008
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    wow

    damn, you certainly know how to write a picture.


  • hollowgod89
    February 18, 2008
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    great write...
    kudos to yous bri
    x
    x

  • Zarokk666
    February 18, 2008

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    well, love
    another excellent piece!
    a bit different, but still pretty cool

    see you soon, my dear
    yours forever
    Zarok


  • Laura-Critchley
    February 18, 2008

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    You go girl.

    This is an amazing write.

    So erotica!

    Kudos to you =D

    Take care sweetie =)

    Laura <3


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    February 18, 2008
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    This is wonderful sweetie, so hot and very sexy great work! xx

  • DarkRomantic113
    February 18, 2008
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    HOT HOT HOT. I shouldn't have read this before bed...*giggles*

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