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Pools Of Blue

Pools Of Blue

You think you know me.
You really do.
I see that you believe,
That you can always understand.
But, you don't.
And you never will.
You'll never get what has happened,
You'll never see what's going on,
You'll never know will come next.
You do not know me at all.
I'm not even half of
The person
You think me to be.
So many lies,
So many tragedies,
So many secrets,
Hide behind these
Innocent, azure eyes.
Things you'd never
Expect,
Things you'd never
Guess.
You think you know my pain,
But, can you truly say
That you have felt it too?
Have you felt it burning
Thoughout your body,
Prickling your every choice,
Your every movement,
Your every speech.
Who do you think I am?
What do you think you know?
Have you looked deep,
Down into these pools of blue?
Everyone's eyes tell a different
Story.
And sometimes I wonder,
What you see in mine.

Author notes

"Sometimes you have to take the leap and build your wings on the way down."--And isn't that the truth?

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  • thepoeticone
    March 14, 2008
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    it was very good, I Liked it because it was real, and it flowed good job


  • aligurl
    February 25, 2008

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    I can honestly say, yes I have. I still feel burdened with it, but like my quote says. I lept and tried to leave it all behind. thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.

  • oldphotosonlybringt
    February 18, 2008

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    this was a very good poem, and very true as well;
    though many may say they understand they dont really only you can feel your pain no matter how much anyone else tryes they cant good luck with your contest ...


    endless-lover

  • DestiniesTwined
    February 17, 2008

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    This is amazing. Good luck in the contest! I hope you win, (Not to be bias because I haven't seen the other peoms)But fantastic job!

  • Hope Angel silver member
    February 17, 2008

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    I love this! It's amazing! Best of luck in the contest and I hope you win somthing! ILY

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