Wild and free like a mustang under the setting western skies.
My spirit is untamed.
Free.
The way it belongs.
A fire burns within me.
I fight with feirce intensity.
I love unconditionally.
The earth is my mother.
The moon is my guide.
Relying on just my instinct.
For my heart is a tricky thing.
I've learned that it is unreliable.
The one who tried to tame me, will have a rough time.
I shall forever be untamed.
Wild and free.
Thats how I am
To lock me in a cage would cause you much pain.
My fire will burn you.
Nothing will ever cage my spirit.
I am not one to submit easily.
One day you will see.
But sadly that day will come to late for you.
I will be gone by then.
Running wild with the winds of my brothers and sisters.
Try to beat me.
I dare you.
You will give in before I do.
That I promise you.
I have the soul of a fighter.
And the heart of a lover.
Together they create a spirit so strong.
A contest entry
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Comments
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Thanks for entering! I dont really see how that's your emotion right now.. But still a really really great poem.
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wow.... I love this...verys well written.....Thank you very much for entering...this is a great poem......I love it.....
~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~ -
This is beautiful.
Full of emotion, I love it.
The first line blew me away :
Wild and free like a mustang under the setting western skies.
the imagery created from those few words is literally jaw dropping.
Well done! This is a beautiful and honest piece.
Thank you for entering and goodluck!
Arc-En-Ciel--x -
tabbie this is absolutely beautiful. i LOVE it. and you. keep writing babe :]
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