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i looked but didnt see

I've wanted to know what i didn't have
i asked around but no-one told
i cried,i would hide
but then i learned i have to look
so i looked but i didn't see
My mother said it's about love
My sister said its about God above
i didn't know what they meant

i went to church i followed my heart

Then now what i see is what i thought

i didnt see.My life ahead my past behind

it was all part of my life.you know as i look back

my mom always said i was blind.but i could see

it was all confusing to me but then i learned it meant

to follow my heart and dont follow what people say.I

did.I looked and i saw

was it good?Is there anything i need to change?

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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    mom can help . but no one can shape your thoughts..carry on with your thinking and creativity....peter