More than just a pretty face
More than just a pretty smile
I see beyond
Not many do
I see the way she tourtures you
I see beyond your pretty face
I see into your soul
The brusing there you cannot see
Cuz they cant see in your soul
A contest entry
- More than just a pretty face... by aligurl.
625 points, ended February 25, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked this but it was kind repetitive. I think if you made it a little longer and added more details or context to the poem, it could be a great piece. It has potential. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
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