I tell him the rain must be falling
& he sweeps the hair out of my eyes
gently kissing the gloss off of my lips
burning a moment inside my skull
[We interlaced our forevers inside each other's pockets
hoping maybe one day we'll be together for a day like this.]
& we lie in the grass until the wind rolls away
defining a storybook version of a real life romance
singing away about our dreams, hopes, & wishes
kissing the infidelities off each other's bodies
[We danced along the sidewalks in our love song way
knowing that one day we'll be together again for a day like this.]
♥
Author notes
lovelovelovelovelovelove.
A contest entry
- Love by Yumi.
600 points, ended March 27, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
She gets this way when she misses you.
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Simply beautiful. I enjoyed reading this very much. Keep up the great work.
Erica ^.^
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this is so sweeeeeeeeeet,,,.... and i knoooowwww whaaaat youuuu meeeeaaaaannnnn....:'( aaahh. am sorry. i just love it.
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Ohohoh wowwws [=
I even love the please comment thingymajiggy [=
'kissing the infidelities off each other's bodies'
beautifuls [=
♥
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wow.
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Truly beautiful and magnificent ... lovely from top to bottom.
However I asked for 10 line poems and you have done 12 so I have to DQ this I am sorry
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oh baby, I love this! so cute
"& we lie in the grass until the wind rolls away
defining a storybook version of a real life romance
singing away about our dreams, hopes, & wishes
kissing the infidelities off each other's bodies"
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