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Love's Rebirth

It is a rebirth of the butterflies
My heart is fluttering
My smile is never ending
Your kiss is like nothing I have never known
Gentle yet forceful.
Meant to heal all the broken pieces of my soul
I wish I could tell you the truth
That I wish for you to be my savior (the guy who proves me wrong)
That I’ve wished for that….so long
But you look at me with those big brown eyes
And then we talk for 4 or 5 hours about nothing and everything
In between the kisses, the laughs, the flirtations
We share each other
Forget about the world at large
And I die….happy.

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  • Just4u
    February 21, 2008
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    Sometimes to return
    we need to be seen
    through another's eyes

    Hugs...Eddy


  • showtunediva
    February 20, 2008

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    Short... sweet to the point. sometimes poems like these do the best at capturing emotions. Nice job Leigh!