Bubble Bubble
The fish swim around
The shark was rough and penguins waddled
It was an aquarium
Giant Hippos and flying birds
Large seals
The turtles swam
The shark tunnel was clear
It was heaven
Oh how it was a joy
A contest entry
- 5000 points winner takes all. Easy stuff. by Nogod.
5000 points, ended March 3, 2008, 24 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I truly enjoy reading your poem...
It, for me, implied such a carefree feeling...
Great write.. (.^_^.).\/ -
My congratulations to you, "yellowdolphin", for your trophy in this contest. But not only that; I read all the poems in the competition, and congratulations on having what was the most golden and memorable "yesterday" of all the entrants. May it be treasure in your heart for many years to come!
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This is a wonderful poem for me to read. My little girl Courtney is 9 years old and went to see some dolphins today. She went on a big boat and saw dolphins and big fish and pelicans. Then they looked around a big aquarium with sharks and stingrays and other sea creatures. it took her over an hour to tell me all about it. She loved it, and this is why you won. Because you must have had so much fun you put it in words. I printed this poem and showed Courtney and she is going to write one aswell now, all thanks to you and your wonderful day at an aquarium. Congratulations.
Dave and courtney
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Joy today, gone tomorrow - now both in the past. Sounds like a fun time. A bit out of the ordinary maybe.
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Sounds like an unfoggetable day. When my grade 4 class went to the zoo, my buddy Sandy Cook was bitten on the hand by a monkey!
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