I look at myself
willing to die
everything is fucked
and nothings alright
Why has this happened
This incurable fate
composed of torture,
painful and useless,
unneeded and thoughtless,
but yet it remains.
why does this happen
all of the time?
my heart is racing
my blood spills
and now i am crying,
crying acid tears...
I know i will die.
I know it will hurt.
I know you don't care.
I know what I'm worth.
To you i am nothing
a shadow in the dark
a candle in the light
something not needed
something not right...
So now i sit here
bleeding it out
all of this hate
and all of my doubts.
I know you won't miss me
You were never there.
and now that i'm gone
I know you won't care.
So good bye Cruel Fate
The pain in my dreams
I have escaped...
Or so it seems....
Author notes
Well, i tried not to rhyme, but i just couldn't do it, so it's half and half, and i like the way it turned out.
A contest entry
- Anything Dark by satan-.
460 points, ended March 2, 2008, 75 entries
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Comments
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this is very good it is sometimes hard for me not to rhyme as well but all the well this is a truly great poem!!
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Ahhh... a dark write, most surely.
You wrote very well for this contest, I do believe. 
I wish you well. 
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I like the how the unintentional rhymes add brilliantly to the flow. Powerful words....thanks for entering.
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