I sit quietly and write
All I love and all I hate
Think of when I used to laugh
I realize, suicide is my fate
How did so much misery come?
All this wishing I would die
Crying every night is no way to live
Thinking of suicide
I should be out, and happy
With the friends I haven't made
but instead, suicide swarms my head
While I think, I begin to fade
Will anyone care when im gone?
When there's nothing left
Except my voice in this writing
Telling what their hurtful words meant
Now you feel bad about what you said
Now you wish you hadn't hurt me
But i'm gone
Wake up call
I'm not coming back
Author notes
Contest Entry for Satan
A contest entry
- Anything Dark by satan-.
460 points, ended March 2, 2008, 75 entries
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Comments
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Such a sorrow filled poem but beautifully written. You have really expressed some deep emotions here, something I am not good at. A superbly penned piece, keep it up
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wake up call im not comin back
love that line
love the whole thing actually
nailed it is an understatement -
suicide affects more people than some would believe. this is very sad...but more often than not its the exact thoughts that go through depressed minds. you nailed it.
legendd
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so sad. so bitter. this was brilliant. so very full of sorrow
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Captures my latest thoughts perfectly. Thanks for entering.
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