My arms are scarred with
tragedies of such
sweet sorrow.
My tears are falling
as blood drops.
I'm not real, I
can't feel, and
you can't hear my
pleas.
I'm hurtling towards Earth, shot
down in midflight.
Hypnotized by the redeeming
light.
I'm lost and bleeding.
I can no longer
feel the breath
of life.
All my life I've
been waiting in the
dark. Waiting for
someone to save me.
I miss you. I hate
me for living without
you.
Dark, and dreamless.
I'm living cold, and
in the hard ground.
Haunting memories
of my past swirl in my head.
There's room inside for
you in my dark, empty heart.
Please don't feel for
me. I'm coming for
you, but you forgot
me long ago.
I'm so alone.
A contest entry
- Anything Dark by satan-.
460 points, ended March 2, 2008, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - the black hole were your soul used to be by nobody knows me.
750 points, ended February 23, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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Thankyou for entering my contest good luck
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Yeah, it does remind me of Evanescence, but I think they are a great inspiration, and your poem just proves that Lots of emotion in this poem...thanks for entering!
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thanx, I dont really see how this would sound like evanescence, I wasnt listeaning to them when I wrote this, and I wasnt thinking of them.....
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Ummm...it sounds alot like evanescence, but I wouldn't say you're copying her really...
Either way, it's beautiful! You are a wonderful writer and a wonderful person. Love muchly,
~Big sis
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Thanks, someone accused me of stealing lines from the band. It may have some of the darkness Amy uses, but I dont think I used any of the lyrics from any of the songs!
Anyways~
Wuvs u muchly!
~lil~sis~
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