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Inner Pain

I don't know what to do,
When my world comes crashing thru.

How will I handle the pain?
I have no clue.
My heart is in pain.
My mind is drained.

I don't know what to do,
When my world comes crashing thru.

I can't handle it.
I'm crashing here.
Don't you care?
I'm falling in.

I don't know what to do,
When my world comes crashing thru.

How could you all do this to me?
I want to be alone.
Nobody can change my mind this time.
My mind is bleeding.

I don't know what to do,
When my world comes crashing thru.

I can't deal with this drama.
I want it all to end.
How can you just stab me in the back?
Burn in HELL!!

BECAUSE I'M DONE!!!!!!!!!!!

Author notes

So much pain gone through these past few days and I wrote it all out...I love you kt and peighton thanks for ur help getting through this!!

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  • Pei-Pei
    February 29

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    this is great and your welcome for what i have no clue and i just sung this poem n it sounded great but something is missing ily s much great poem


  • XxNumbinsidexX
    February 24
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    a very great write!!!

    i hate when this happens when you finaly open up an trust someone again after so long an they turn around stab you an watch you bleed out right their it makes it so fucking hard......
    great write though it reminds me of whats happend in my life i like the way it flows !!


    • Times Change
      February 24
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      thank you for the comment. thankfully I think the whole issue is cleared up now...hopefully!!

      • XxNumbinsidexX
        February 24
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        im glade its clearing up now only if my stuff would fix its self up

        • Times Change
          February 24
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          lol I had to fix it myself but you just have to work on it and talk it out and eventually it'll get better

          • XxNumbinsidexX
            February 24
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            the only way i have to talk it out in life is through poetry.Every one an everything els has let me down or given up on me....Im just barly holding on

            • Times Change
              February 24

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              well keep holding on as best you can.
              i'm sure people will miss if u go.
              i havent known you long but i will.
              so keep holding on!!

  • Lost Emo gold member
    February 23
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    a lot of pain and anger pouring out of this piece. i love the imagery u use. overall great write


    • Times Change
      February 23
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      thanx dave, i had a really bad few days

      • Lost Emo gold member
        February 23
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        i'm guessing u got stabbed in the bk by a friend again or something along these lines
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