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carressing essence (gold trophy)


quiet, as the mind wanders relentlessly
visions of life as it is,
as it isn’t, as it should be
where are we now that the shadows fall
becoming longer
then disappear within the darkness

but even in blindness
where nothing seems real
visions of you fill my head
reminding me
beckoning with outstretched hand
to just hold on

where do I go from here
to what fine dream
to what frolicsome adventure
who will share my life’s moments
what special place calls


life is fickle

yet I know that within this darkness
lies the passing of time
that will awaken once again
the hopes, the dreams, the meaning
of love beyond measure
of a life fulfilled

dee garner
© February 17, 2006

For ms-cuddles, a lady who knows
the trials and tribulations of life
and speaks with inspiration, tenderness,
compassion and passion

www.allpoetry.com/ms-cuddles

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Prompt- ms-cuddles
www.allpoetry.com/ms-cuddles
Read ms-cuddle's poetry and you'll be able to see where this inspiration is coming from. A fine poetess indeed.

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  • Jessabella
    July 8, 2008

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    You've done very well with this, you write very poetically (to sound original) and that is something that is getting harder to find. I don't think I can even write like that . Keep writing. ~ Jessabella


  • poetryality silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    I left a long comment on this page a day or two ago but I am experiencing PC problems and was booted off before I could press submit...

    You have captured the essence of this sweet soul.

    Nikki is my AP daughter. She is all that is written here, and of course more. It is easy to see that you spent time discovering who ms-cuddles truly is. Your words engulf her wondrous spirit. I love her dearly, and have spent long nights on the phone expressing that love, sharing, and listening. This poem makes me think that you too may have done the very same thing.

    This work is wonderful, and filled with the spirit of sisterhood.

    Thank you for this entry my sister/friend and I wish you well in this Comp.


    Always ♥

    Renee


  • Mari Goes gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    You've chosen the most perfect title to this poem!
    Your words have a soothing feel, and have that effect of great hope.
    What a great feeling when someone inspires us to write such a beautiful poem. Lovely!


  • Desire gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    Precious!!

    This is Magnificent Dee~
    Love the Emotions and Images You have shared along with the Inspiration~ Beautiful weaving of thoughts
    that touch Spirit and tugs at the Heartstrings
    Just Love this one!!
    You have Honored my Grandmomma~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • sunny day
    March 11, 2008

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    Dee, This just flowed straight from the page to my heart with the loving emotions and sentiments that were held within your words so beautiful. This is truly a golden piece of your heart that you have penned for ms-cuddles' heart. You brought the tears flowing again as I just read the one smiley did for me. It's so beautiful. Thank you for sharing your illustrious gift with all of us and best wishes in the contest. Love you my friend, Joyce


  • ms-cuddles
    March 5, 2008

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    A Heart All A-Flutter

    This is so sweet. I must say that you have summed me up quite well, especially now. I'm quietly screaming inside and reality is well.... you know. Thank you so much for this. Your heart has definitly touched mine and made it smile. You've wrapped warmth all around me. Hugs~ Cuddles


  • Ephiphany
    March 5, 2008

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    Very heartfelt poem you have here ms catz

    soft and lovely indeed, and full of beautiful imagery. I truly can say, that I understand the inspiration thereof and this my dear is an amazing peice, that I feel honored in reading.

    Definately inspired by this.

    Ephiphany♥


  • Elle Kaye
    March 3, 2008

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    I loved it. it was extremely well written, i loved the message it gave, and it flowed beautifully. A truley splendid peice of poetry. Fantastic job
    ~L

  • Durlon
    March 3, 2008
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    Beautifully done. Reads so fluently and I like the message.


  • frownsnfreckles
    March 3, 2008

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    'hold on'
    life is fickle'
    'a life fulfilled'
    I enjoyed the progression of this poem from doubt and uncertainty to a positive acceptance and hope for the future.
    The start of the first line 'quiet' set the tone for the inner questioning.

  • Zyskandar A Jaimot
    March 3, 2008

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    a rare friend indeed this is a very fine piece of writing i liked this especially:"to what frolicsome adventure
    who will share my life’s moments
    what special place calls
    life is fickle" very good tribute/accolade to your friend thanks for sharing regards zaj


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    February 27, 2008

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    I don't know this poet but will one day read her poetry but for now will have to sufice reading yours which by the way is a wonderful tribute to her...


  • warrior-eagle
    February 21, 2008

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    Wow.
    Wow.
    I felt myself being sucked into this poem,
    that's how good it is.
    It's so peaceful, so wonderful,
    and I am sure this Ms.Cuddle's is amazing as well.

    ...Simply Me♥

  • Yemassee gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    ms cuddles, I'm Mr. Cuddles, lol. No wait, Yemuddles...

    Silliness aside, what a read, I guess I've been silly this morning and was not prepared for a serious poem, but it hit strong, and the key I think is that it seemed earnest and unaffected and not sententious like many who speak of hope and spirituality...no, this was different, it was a pleasure to read....and the introspection and intelligence in the poem was welcomed. I'd feature it but Ima and I gave all our points away the other day, so maybe just make believe I did.


    • catz Moderators member
      March 2, 2008
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      It's the thought that counts, Yem and I'm flattered that you even thought of featuring the poem. Thanks for reading it and leaving such a special comment.

      And, hey, silly or serious, your comments are always much appreciated

      Dee


  • individuality gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    a soft and loving poem, almost a lament i think, what does lie beyond this reach of life, we will all soon find out a good poem.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    this poem is so compassionate for your friend, when life gets harsh we tend to wallow in poetry, passionate in all aspects in caring is a must as you show! good luck in this contest..
    Moons

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