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Home Sweet Home

Home is what we all long
Our one special place where we belong
Memories never forgotten
Each one as soft as cotton

Some say it wouldn't matter
Whether it's nice or if it will flatter
Either its small or its big
Even if it's of brick or of twig
Those won't matter, as long as the windows don't shatter

Have a roof over your head
Or choose a small wooden shed
Make each memory count
Even if it's of small amount

A contest entry

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  • in-the-twilight
    February 18, 2008
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    This is really good... I liked it... great rhyme and in an accrostic amazing! I liked it! xoxo Meg


  • PonyPride
    February 18, 2008
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    wow, i liked this quite a bit. It was simple and unique with a bit of humor. It doesn't really follow what I wanted though because I gave home as an option so unfortunetly I cant give you anything but amazing job anyway