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Beautiful Torture

Beautiful lover of mine
your shallow words
echo in my mind

Each tainted word
haunting
and taunting
in my mind

Falsefied lover
why
must you torture me so?

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    February 17, 2008
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    Very well written with emotion and nice flow. Hugs, Bunny