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My Last Words

I'm lying on my death bed,
Husband trying not to cry.
"Your brother did it better,"
I say, just before I die.

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I REALLY hope that's how it happens.

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    Wow - and ouch for the husband. Definitely something unique I have wandered upon in here.

    Thanks for entering,